Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

:D:XD::rage::|
 

a postscript :: magical muse by =dinosaurkiss:icondinosaurkiss:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


Amongst the sodden sheets
he leaves with her words
still moist on his fingertips.
False copies for the tongued
verses, signed by a poet,
post-scripted by a Thief.
©2009 =dinosaurkiss
:icondinosaurkiss:

Author's Comments

Yeah ... Comments really would be appreciated. I've not written much poetry, so excuse this attempt!

This is an entry for the Magical Muse competition: [link]

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icongedwaylem:
~gedwaylem Jun 22, 2009, 9:03:11 AM
i actually quite like this. gives off interesting and subtle tones

--
"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:icondinosaurkiss:
=dinosaurkiss Jun 22, 2009, 11:07:44 AM
Thank you for the comment :]
:iconscarlettletters:
=Scarlettletters Jun 23, 2009, 3:05:12 AM
Thanks for a great entry!

--
"To really ask is to open the door to the whirlwind. The answer may annihilate the question and the questioner." - Lestat
:icondinosaurkiss:
=dinosaurkiss Jun 23, 2009, 3:57:16 AM
Thanks! It's cool idea for a competition. There are some amazing entries.
:iconkat1e-:
=kat1e- Jun 25, 2009, 5:32:39 PM
good luck with the competition darlin'! :heart:

I love how you write <3

--
Photography | UK Art
:icondinosaurkiss:
=dinosaurkiss Jun 26, 2009, 8:06:41 AM
Aww, thank you. LOVE YOU MORE <3
:iconrallyroundthefamily:
~rallyroundthefamily Jul 10, 2009, 3:20:02 PM
i entered the contest, too :]

excellent piece and congrats on the win!! :hug:

--
--Thought I was incredible and killed the Hulk--

--Nothing's gonna change my world--
:icontheafterwhys:
~TheAfterWhys Jul 10, 2009, 7:17:14 PM
It's beautiful, and very vivid, in very few words.

--
Whats up?
But wishing stars,
and little men from mars.
:icondinosaurkiss:
=dinosaurkiss Jul 11, 2009, 12:27:09 AM
Thank you so much! I still can't believe it :O
Previous Page1234Next Page

Details

June 22
280 bytes

Statistics

38
27 [who?]
628 (0 today)
8 (0 today)

Site Map

©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
About Us | Contact Us | Site Tour | Help & FAQ Advertise | Services Etiquette | Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Copyright Policy